Wednesday, September 2, 2009

o geezus


That picture. It describes my reaction today perfectly.

My reaction to my old stories. Except it was more like "DB OHMYGAD." In the library. While I was working there. -great library aide- Not only were they horribly written, but GOD I wrote about some weird crap. Plus, I had some "beta" versions of stories I'm working on now, such as Broken7.

I'll give you a few examples.



Broken 7 - I believe most of my watcher...people whatever you call them on here know what Broken7, or B7, is. If not, I'll describe it in a nutshell. It's basically a story based on an rp I'm in (that I love love LOVE) called OCRP (Original Character Roleplay.) It's the characters seven years in the future, and how they have changed. TODAY I found B7 Beta. When I first read it, I thought "OH this is pretty good!" And then, not even a page in, my OC, Haruka, kills herself.

Cue the DB face. Seriously?
NOT EVEN A PAGE INNN. -sob- Hnnngh. Though the original idea for this could have, I think, worked out. Rather than starting with Haruka seeing the house after seven years, it starts with her death and then goes to the past, which has a scene that relates with that. And so on and so forth.


Battle Royale - This is actually generally new. Still a "beta" version. This wasn't as horrific as B7 (good god.) This started with the winner, well, winning. It starts with Rorrim, who was originally supposed to win (SORRY not any more |D) finishing off Shilo (who was the runner-up originally.) But the way I wrote it was so "WUT" that I couldn't understand who was who and what the hell was happening.


Me.Lo.Di - First mush story. Must I say any more?


Yeeup. All pretty gay. :I I guess it's where my gay originated.

TL;DR: there is honestly something wrong with what I write. :I

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